I received the first sixteen chapters of proofing and editing suggestions from Tammy last night and I could hardly wait till morning to check it out. The punctuation for sure is getting tightened up and she has made some suggestions, which I eagerly adopted. There is still an ongoing discussion about the introduction (Ironic revisit to my last post). I am really unsure right now where to go with it. A possibility I have suggested is to shorten up the whole chapter from his childhood as a small flashback and then bring out the details of his childhood friend and his abilities later. I am just not sure at this point.