Futher character developement

I continue to develop the main characters in Firetok. I put down several chapters this week with what I hope will be pertinent information and background on three characters in particular. It seems the deeper I edit, the more I find I need to add. Two being main characters I spent a bit of time on this week. I am finding on this edit that the dialog for the protagonist is a little short and lacking. It helped to have someone else give me a bit of a list of things they would like to know about them. For me its all in my head but writing down the important details is where I am right now.